The last page is particularly effective as you switch between the narrator’s voices. I particularly like the ‘grey’ motif.
The use of different fonts made the narrative clearer to me,I am obviously slow on the uptake.
Jack you have produced a mature, unsettling piece of writing.
June 4, 2015 at 12:51 pm
The last page is particularly effective as you switch between the narrator’s voices. I particularly like the ‘grey’ motif.
The use of different fonts made the narrative clearer to me,I am obviously slow on the uptake.
Jack you have produced a mature, unsettling piece of writing.